Thursday, 10 April 2014

Myztique Fiafia

Watching me dance at the Fiafi, my mum and dad, sister and brother were excitied foday of my life. My mum screamed at me because i was dancing well. That’s why Fiafia is the r the best best.

Wednesday, 2 April 2014

Swimming


We have been learning all about independent and dependent clauses in complex sentences.

This complex sentence that I have written uses a dependent and independent clause. A dependent clause, needs extra detail so that it can complete the sentence, whereas an independent sentence could actually make a sentence on its own.


Here is my sentence:
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I have highlighted the dependent clause yellow and the independent clause red.


Splashing our feet, the water came out of the pool,

Friday, 21 March 2014

cyclone lusi


Howlinwith rattling? the widows Surging waves flooding with capped waves and looking for the shelter the waves
were flooding the shops and houses the people was scared of the water because it was flooding the shops and houses.




My next learning step is by making my sentences have correct puctuation

g winds smashing through trees. All over New Zealand pouring down rain and the rumbling clouds

Friday, 14 March 2014

Using Our Key Competencies


In literacy I am Learning to join in and participate during discussion.
In maths I am Learning to be a great group member by listening because normally I don't lIsten to My teacher that much because I’m too busy talking to my friends.


Wednesday, 12 March 2014

Mr BFG

Giving Sophie a drink, the BFG sang a song.  Sophie said “It  is delicious.”  
Flying, Sophie flow up in the air and floated around and singing with the BFG.