Thursday 14 March 2019

Climate change summarie

From reading this article I have learned that in the country Kiribati it is very dangerous, and people from there have moved because their homes have been damaged caused by the water rise and also because they’ve heard good things about another country and decided to move there because it’s a Better place for them to live the rest of their lives.  People who are residents of their country have rights to move to another country after losing their homes. There are so many families that are threatened by their government to stay in the country they migrated from and not to leave immediately because of the damages that were brought to their home. Most cultures are ethnocentric , and judging from this article i think we all have different behaviours, customs, and religions.
Image 2. Kiribati residents paddle to a nearby village called Abatao. During high tide, villagers must travel by canoe, not foot. Traditional Kiribati houses are made from wood from the trunk of coconut and pandanus trees are lashed together with string made from the fibers of coconut husks. Photo: Itinnaibo Aukitino/iGeneration Youth

2 comments:

  1. Interesting read Myztique, do you think NZ will be receiving more people from Kiribati as a result of sea level rises in the Pacific ?

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  2. Well done Myztique you have identified two major issues relating to climate change and how it affects the people of Kiribati. Good use of linking words, these helps the flow of ideas in your paragraph. You might like to focus on run-on sentences. This is where your sentences are too long. A good way to edit your writing is to say the paragraph out loud to yourself. Mumble the words, under your breath. Say each word slowly, this will help you to delete or add words as you make each sentence sound better or sound grammatical. This will help you decide how to take a long sentence and rewrite it as two sentences.

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