Friday 21 March 2014

cyclone lusi


Howlinwith rattling? the widows Surging waves flooding with capped waves and looking for the shelter the waves
were flooding the shops and houses the people was scared of the water because it was flooding the shops and houses.




My next learning step is by making my sentences have correct puctuation

g winds smashing through trees. All over New Zealand pouring down rain and the rumbling clouds

2 comments:

  1. Hi Myztique i like your story because it has lots of good ideas.

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  2. Hi Myztique i like your story because it has lots of good ideas.

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