Walt: write a detailed introduction with hook and orientation.
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Have you ever been to Omaru creek before? Well last Thursday my maths class went to the omaru creek near glen innes pools before lunch. When we got there we sat down with other schools and waited until it started. When it started the first thing what was on was a man doing the pukana and wearing a rubbish bag around his waist and a chain around his leg.
After that the schools went near the river so they could see what was happening.A man named Tamati came out of the hole and talked to us that the river is talking to us if it’s moving.After
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