Thursday, 30 August 2018

Muddy Fields Poetry

MUDDY FIELDS
Playing in the morning
As it feels a little boring
Running around the field
Muddy places all around
With my foot stuck in the ground
Having pins and needles
I see a black poodle
Get a bowl
I want some noodles.

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  1. Samoa3 September 2018 at 10:53

    Malo e lelei Myztique, Your poem is short, but it has a lot of detailed sentences in it. I’m
    Sure every kid can relate to you, when you say “ with my foot stuck in the ground, having pins and needles”. I hope to see more creative poems, well done Myztique!

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    1. Pilinilose5 September 2018 at 21:09

      Malo e Lelei Myztique

      what i love about your Poem.Is it makes scenes and i know that heaps of people does go home and just,grab a bowl and wants some noodles and that makes people feel hungry right now.And i just want to say you've,done a great work and keep up the good work!!
      From Lini

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